Today I finished the opening trench sequence which I started yesterday. I think its good. But the first thing that pops into mind everytime I see it is that I should redo the fat soldier. For some reason the brush tool is thicker, and I didn't notice until exporting. It doesn't take away from the scene too much, if any. But personally it stands out to me like a soar thumb. If I have time, I will come back and redo the soldier to make him fit in with the rest of the soldiers. The arm movements of the main character and sergeant are a little rigid, but overall good. I am unsure yet if the whistle scene is effective as Ill need to draw and add the train conductor to know, timing wise.
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